Cross Country
Yesterday it was cross country for Makaraka school. It was at the Matthews farm. We went by bus. First we walked the track with Mrs Hannah and Mr Milne.I was nervous but I knew I could do it. Then we were called up to the start line. We were off! We jumped over two hay bales and went up two hills and then went down a long hill. Then I boosted to the finish line. In the end I came second. It was hard to run up the hills but I enjoyed it.
My legs felt like jelly after the race. When it was finish my Mum, Me ,Rose and Iyve and I went into town.
By Molly
Hi Molly I ́m Finn from Mangapapa school. I did cross country too not long ago.I came 4th so I am going to inter school on wednesday.I also like all the detail you put into your writing.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good running and learning.
Finn
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, my name is Peyton from Mangapapa School . I really Like your Post Of how you did When and After Cross Country and how your day went . I hope you did great at Cross Country and Congratulations for coming Second . My School Actually had Cross Country Last Week on Wednesday and I was A bit Similar of how you felt after the Race .
But good Job on your running and coming second !!
Hi Molly my name is Taine I'm a student at Room12 Mangapapa school. I like the way you describe yourself when you went over the hills and after the cross-country. it's really cool that you came 2nd.
ReplyDeleteYours sincerely Taine
Hi Molly,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Rosanna and I am a student in Room 12 at Mangapapa school. I really liked that you said that it was hard to run up the hills because it would be hard to do that and that you said after the race your legs felt like jelly.
It's cool that you came second in your cross country.
Keep up the great work.
Kiora Molly I like your post on your cross country You must be really fast to be able to come 2nd kau mau te wehi Molly.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, My name is Kassidy from Mangapapa School.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have explained your cross-country to me. Your cross-country sounded so fun because you guys got to jump over hay bales. How did you feel when you came second? Did you like cross-country.
Hi Molly my name is Eruera from Mangapapa School. I really like the detail you've put into your post it is really really cool. Wow it's really cool that you came in second place in your cross country I came like 20th.You must be very fast to come up second who was the person that beat you? But I think you need to put a little bit more information in the middle of your text because it just feels like you just run up hills that's it. But next time you write just remember to put a little more information on but other than that it's fine I love your text!
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Hi Molly, My name is Aylee and the student from mangapapa school In room 14. My school also did cross country.I came 8th.Was it hard to go over the hills? I really enjoyed how you said your legs felt like jelly.
ReplyDeleteHi I’m Jaiden, I really like your cross country writing.What place did you come?We did a cross country too at Nelson park.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, My name is Hine i am a Student at Mangapapa School. I liked how you explained where your Cross country was and that you had to jump over hay bales, go up and down some hills. Maybe next time you could talk about what it felt like at the start of the race.
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Hi Molly
ReplyDeleteHow are you celebrating Maori language week? We are going to korero a lot. What did you do over the weekend? I went to the foodcourt with my family and I ate dumplings, fried rice, noodles and fizzy drinks.
hi molly
ReplyDeletei relly enjoyed writing pop songs with you.
maybe you could make a slided abut what song mene to you.